only if you are with me to support.
i don't mind being forgotten by my dear ones,
only if you remember me always.
i don't mind being carried on to 4 shoulder's,
only if i had lived my life with you.
I just don't mind that i am all alone in the whole world,
if and only if, I have a small world of my own with you.
aree mere bhai kitna dimag laga ke likhta ha?
ReplyDeleteand kabi kabhi bright side pe bhi likha kar
Cool poem.... im glad that its not as sad as u alwAys write. :):)
ReplyDeletehi hi ...
ReplyDeletethanks mini and adi..
@ minni.. coz i m not, always sad.
@ Adi.. working on it.
such a nice poem i love it.....go on!
ReplyDeletethanks veera..
ReplyDeletewith all your support, i will definately try to improve.
good work :)
ReplyDeleteabe ye tune churaya hai ya khud likha hai?????????????????????
ReplyDelete@ anu.
ReplyDeletethanks di
@ jayant
bhaai khud hi likha hai..
tjhe lagta hai main chor hoon..
:(
gud........well said......
ReplyDelete@ swati
ReplyDeletethanks dear
nice........
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