Wednesday, July 13, 2011

life and WE

Going after the one who does not care,
and not caring for the 1 who cares about you,
such a sarcastic world it is.

Its really ironical to know that friends are only remembered when you want to enjoy the life,
Its bitter but its true
only the best ones are remembered in times of need,
some call it affection, some call it greed.

the more you want to thrive,
the more you are lost inside,
never looking back wont help you,
neither going forward.

The world has become sarcastic,
and we are mere beginners,
to learn the irony,
the bitter taste of life.
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8 comments:

  1. Vikas SheoranJuly 13, 2011 at 11:56 AM

    True to its best.....the lines convey the best meanings....the world is being selfish..they care for themselves not others...the world is mean n selfish..!!!!

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  2. Meenakshi GangwaniJuly 15, 2011 at 1:19 AM

    Seeing life in a very big picture He-ma,,, bt always remember,,, there are many aspects ,,, bt I appreciate your perception, I must say we have different ideas abt life but I really appreciate the poem holding very deep emotions and especially experiences. I liked it very much though didn't go in those emotions bt it was nice :)

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  3. sweet veeraJuly 15, 2011 at 1:33 AM

    hey himu ........like your perception of peeking life in a differ way but u should change it as per u r saying u r alone bt u r not we are always with u.......never felt alone. and really ur thought is nice.

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  4. HimanshuJuly 15, 2011 at 1:45 AM

    @ mini.. and veera... thanks for your comments.. but thats how i sometimes i feel abt life... SOMETIMES.. and yaa.. life has many aspects..and its 1 of them....

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  5. smiling soulJuly 15, 2011 at 3:00 AM

    reality is shown in ur words..
    nice again.. :)

    keep writing & smiling

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  6. HimanshuJuly 15, 2011 at 4:27 AM

    @ sowmya.. thanks :)

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  7. rashi2sweetJuly 17, 2011 at 4:02 AM

    very true

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  8. Aditya BhasinJuly 30, 2011 at 2:20 AM

    You did presented the real picture of life in words well.

    I hold a different opinion that whether this world is sarcastic. I think this world or a community can be selfish but not sarcastic as whole.

    You have your perception. I have mine. And I respect yours too.

    Keep writing.

    And yes I’m looking to see a post from your side where you present your views and opinion in a broader sense and not in form of a poem.


    Love
    Aditya Bhasin

    Writer at www.ispeakab.wordpress.com

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